Friday, April 15, 2011

abstract poster - "treading water"

to be viewed at 24 x 36


1 comment:

Prof. Yoon Soo Lee said...

Dear Jeff, this is an intriguing image.

On a purely visual level it provokes curiosity.

But, I don't know if I understand the woman's form. What is she doing? Is this the one where one is treading water? Does it relate? Shouldn't it relate?

Also, the expressive type: I would try more contrast in the type sizes: include many, many more smaller text so that the "curves" that are created with the text are not too jagged.