The first image: the gray arms are a bit awkward. The gradation you have at the shoulders are interesting. Can you do more of that so that it doesn't end with a flat gray from elbow to hand? or maybe the gray can be darker?
The middle one seems too much of a close up.
The last image: maybe the up hill can be even more organic.
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Jeff, the background are working better.
The first image: the gray arms are a bit awkward. The gradation you have at the shoulders are interesting. Can you do more of that so that it doesn't end with a flat gray from elbow to hand? or maybe the gray can be darker?
The middle one seems too much of a close up.
The last image: maybe the up hill can be even more organic.
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