Tuesday, May 10, 2011

envelopes




I know it's down to the wire, so if no one can leave a comment I will just go with the one I think is working best. I'm not sure how much time I can devote to doing this anymore, as my book still isn't complete! There is never as much time as there seems.


1 comment:

Prof. Yoon Soo Lee said...

Dear David,

At the size that I see it there are pros and cons for all.

The larger name one is dynamic, but the & gets too complicated.

The middle one seems most subdued. Maybe cluster up the bottom info a bit more so that it doesn't sprawl? (More contrast between your name and content?)

Bottom one: The bottom four lines feel too far apart. Do you need all four? Maybe you can send people to the tumblr account once they get to your website?

Good luck! And work on the book!