But, I don't know if I understand the woman's form. What is she doing? Is this the one where one is treading water? Does it relate? Shouldn't it relate?
Also, the expressive type: I would try more contrast in the type sizes: include many, many more smaller text so that the "curves" that are created with the text are not too jagged.
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Dear Jeff, this is an intriguing image.
On a purely visual level it provokes curiosity.
But, I don't know if I understand the woman's form. What is she doing? Is this the one where one is treading water? Does it relate? Shouldn't it relate?
Also, the expressive type: I would try more contrast in the type sizes: include many, many more smaller text so that the "curves" that are created with the text are not too jagged.
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