Rather than business cards, Yoon Soo and I decided that envelopes that hold the portrait print I will give to everyone who participates in the photo shoot will act as my take away. Here is one idea for the front of the envelope. PLEASE be critical.
The all caps are hard to read. Especially when it gets down to the last three lines of text. The leading does not help!
Can you play around with caps & lowercases as well as leading overall?
The forced justified right now with lack of leading looks "tight" instead of "organized" and "traditional" which it might be if tweaked. Do you want the envelope to say "traditional, organized?"
(Also reminded me a bit of wedding invites. Anyone else get that?)
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Dear David,
The all caps are hard to read. Especially when it gets down to the last three lines of text. The leading does not help!
Can you play around with caps & lowercases as well as leading overall?
The forced justified right now with lack of leading looks "tight" instead of "organized" and "traditional" which it might be if tweaked. Do you want the envelope to say "traditional, organized?"
(Also reminded me a bit of wedding invites. Anyone else get that?)
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