front page needs a little something special! (try our favorite cookie!) this is the most 'generic" feeling page.
the other page need more negative space (white space) so dense! (menu! order forms!)
there are some inconsistencies in where the cost is located (as are the existence of "ad" columns of the right side of your pages.)
can research some more on "order" pages? I feel like there is not a lot of correlation between the small images and the order forms. beauty shots and not informational.
whiteflowerfarm.com is an example. I don't particularly like the website, but i like their flowers so i have to navigate it all the time.
what i was thinking with the images is that people could click on the occasion (birthday, anniversary, holiday, etc. ) and the images would change so they could get an idea of what their cake could look like. I found that the information was so general that if I did a page for each occasion they would be the same.
are you saying that as you start clicking on the "option" buttons you can a more detailed visual of what kind of cake you are ordering? That might be really cool. Right now due to the fact that these images of cropped and treated in the same manner as the front page they merely seem decorative...
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I just lost my comments... shoot.
okay. here is go again.
much better~
front page needs a little something special! (try our favorite cookie!) this is the most 'generic" feeling page.
the other page need more negative space (white space) so dense! (menu! order forms!)
there are some inconsistencies in where the cost is located (as are the existence of "ad" columns of the right side of your pages.)
can research some more on "order" pages? I feel like there is not a lot of correlation between the small images and the order forms. beauty shots and not informational.
whiteflowerfarm.com is an example. I don't particularly like the website, but i like their flowers so i have to navigate it all the time.
they are dense, aren't they. Ill work on that.
what i was thinking with the images is that people could click on the occasion (birthday, anniversary, holiday, etc. ) and the images would change so they could get an idea of what their cake could look like. I found that the information was so general that if I did a page for each occasion they would be the same.
Thanks!
are you saying that as you start clicking on the "option" buttons you can a more detailed visual of what kind of cake you are ordering? That might be really cool. Right now due to the fact that these images of cropped and treated in the same manner as the front page they merely seem decorative...
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