these feel more comfortable. They have a strong horizontal drop line. I would just watch the single or two word lines matching up with the paragraphs to their lefts. They seem like their baselines are a little off.
On the spread that is defining terms, listing the terms alphabetically may help readers navigate through the content to the information they are seeking faster.
In 'Foods to Keep Off Your Plate', is keeping juice off your plate more important than keeping fried foods off? The sequence/hierarchy of that information may be misleading.
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these feel more comfortable. They have a strong horizontal drop line. I would just watch the single or two word lines matching up with the paragraphs to their lefts. They seem like their baselines are a little off.
SO much better!!!!! Yay! Keep going!
On the spread that is defining terms, listing the terms alphabetically may help readers navigate through the content to the information they are seeking faster.
In 'Foods to Keep Off Your Plate', is keeping juice off your plate more important than keeping fried foods off? The sequence/hierarchy of that information may be misleading.
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